Overall, Lauren's rhythm piece is a good foundation for a successful piece, however, it is generally un-cohesive. One of the biggest contributing factors to this lack of cohesion lies in the unequal volume of the different tracks. In order to successfully hear some tracks, the volume needs to be turned up to the point where other sounds will be painfully loud. Also, many individual sections are interesting, but unassociated with the sections that come before and after it.
Lauren's piece as it stands now is analogous to a sketchbook of ideas - they either need to be united or one needs to be singled out and expanded upon.
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